关闭广告
晋江论坛网友交流区宠物情缘
主题:给小东西容容写了一首英文诗诶 [6]
收藏该贴
已收藏
只看楼主
For my pretty little dog

How will I pick you there,
From many boxes near that square;
With your lovely white short hair,
or the tearful expression you wear?

While you were scolded by Dad,
My mom and I would be mad
at him;the only choice he had
was to keep you away from his bed.

Nearly I cannot remember
that so many times as a newer
you were beaten;companied with tears whene'er
I saw you silently sobber

Now you've grown a little big
and more lovely than before;
Dad always says that you're a pig,
But I regard you better image than bore

The girl I was liking animal
No matter what kind at all;
only amity I will call
for,more than humans somehow
№0 ☆☆☆雅澈 2007-06-11 23:12:57留言☆☆☆  加书签 投诉 不再看TA

同学,你的语病很多咧,虽然说写诗,语法不是那么重要,可是因该用正确语法的地方干吗用错误的?所有一些地方没看懂你再说什么
№1 ☆☆☆说实话2007-06-12 06:35:58留言☆☆☆ 
投诉 加书签 引用 不再看TA

英文打油诗?
 
开玩笑呵呵......每节韵压得还行,可是,这是什么体?
№2 ☆☆☆MJ2007-06-12 11:26:50留言☆☆☆ 
投诉 加书签 引用 不再看TA

反正小澈的意思都看懂了
感情也传达到我这里了
很可爱的诗阿
№3 ☆☆☆长长2007-06-12 12:46:31留言☆☆☆ 
投诉 加书签 引用 不再看TA

偶只要求…………………………
 
上pp!!!!!!!
№4 ☆☆☆ 展色楼账房2007-06-13 02:53:21留言☆☆☆ 
投诉 加书签 引用 不再看TA

有的读不懂啊
№5 ☆☆☆小菜2007-06-19 20:12:19留言☆☆☆ 
投诉 加书签 引用 不再看TA

语病挺多,不过还是满可爱的小诗。
lz加油哈~
№6 ☆☆☆厉害达...2007-06-20 15:14:51留言☆☆☆ 
投诉 加书签 引用 不再看TA

回复此贴子

名字:
选择图案:
内容:
(注意:一次最多可提交3000字,且一次最多可提交三张尺寸在1024*1024范围内的图片,超出部分请分次提交!)
图片链接:
(贴图规则)


返回上层 管理 返回本版块首页返回交流区首页返回主页

 

只看楼主